A Requested Fic is MSTed


Notes

MadJackel/Minerva... sorry... I couldn't help MSTing yer fic, I just HAD to... hopefully you'll like the torture level in it if you do read it.

This is an MSTed LEMON! its kind of a companion fic for my Captured Hearts songfic tetralogy.

navy = fic to be MSTed


::Silve drags a struggling Zel into a small room::

Zel: what the heck do you think your doing now!!

Silve: its just a little MSTing Zel!

Zel: don't you need more than two to MST a fic?

Silve: hmmm ::thinking:: I guess you're right!

::suddenly Xellos and Dilgear appear::

Dilgear: ::looks at Zel:: what's she up to this time?

Zel: another MSTing

Xel: just an MSTing... oh poo

Silve: oh... this one will get fun... ::evil wolfie grin::

Xel: reeealy? ::Silve whispers something in his ear:: OOH GOODIE!!!

Zel & Dilgear: ::sweatdrop::

Silve: on with the ficcie!

A Lemony Fic

Zel: oh gods save us! Its a lemon!

by: Minerva (aka: MJ)

Xel: a MadJackel lemon ::grin::

Dilgear: isn't that your twisted Human/Jackyl/Succubus friend who writes Beast Wars lemons... ::worried look::

Silve: YUP! I asked her to write this for me!!

Zel: you need help...

(This is the part for Silve's fic. When Lina and Zel get out of the cave:)

Zel: ::gets glared at by Silve:: that's the "Captive Hearts" series found at her site, http://www.crosswinds.net/~slayersfan/frames.html ... ::grumble:: why do I get reduced to advertising...

Soon they were over and jumped out of the cave. They lay down gasping for air for a few moments before they realized just how they had landed - that Zel was lying atop Lina. At the same moment they blushed, then they kissed...

Zel: ::eyes bug out as he starts to blush:: uh-oh...

Xel: oh... this is just the beginning...

Dilgear: ::sighs glad this isn't focused on HIM::

(Now, it's my turn. *evil laughter*)

Zel: ::looks for a way to escape as he gets an idea of what's going on::

::Xellos and Silve grin and they sit next to Zel, one on each side::

Xel: there is no escape ::grin::

Silve: no escape at all... ::grin::

Zel: oh crap...

The two beloved kissed, timidly at first, then growing bolder, more passionate...and hungry with desire.

Lina couldn't believe she had lived so long without the feel of his soft lips against hers. For now she was certain she would die without them...so warm...so inviting.

Zel: ::gulp:: I knew it... you all want to torture me...

Silve: oh, we don't ALL want to torture you... right Dilly-poo?

Dilgear: um... right... I just got dragged into this...

Zelgadiss quickly found her tongue with his, his mind clouded by the thousand fantasies he had dream of this moment over the years. But now, they all paled in comparison to her sweet touch.

Zel: ::sputters:: F-f-fantasies!!! W-what makes you think I'd have fantasies about LINA!!!

Silve: you sure?

Xel: does that mean I can have Lina then...

Zel: certainly not you fruitcake!!

Dilgear: ::looks at Silve:: he likes her... doesn't he?

Silve: ::noddles::

The pain in his leg was long forgotten, dulled by the pleasure of being near the one he loved.

After what seemed like a wonderful eternity, Zel released his beloved from the kiss. Lina gave a moan of protest till he pressed his lips to her neck, kissing hungrily along the delicate flesh. The sorceress' moan turned to pleasure, twining her fingers in the soft strands of his hair, whispering his name.

Zel: what the... why'd I... er... ::slight blush::

Silve: "impure thoughts?" hehehehehehe

Xel: ::giggles:: I think so

Zel: I AM NOT HAVING IMPURE THOUGHTS!!!

Dilgear: I believe Silve would say "methinks he protests too much"

Silve: very good Dilgear!

A smile crept across Zelgadiss' lips as he listened to her. He continued his attentions on her tender throat, undoing the clasp of her cape to reveal more of it.

Lina was glad to be free of the heavy cloak, which now lay beneath them like a blanket. She quickly returned the favor, pulling at the fabric of Zel's cape till she managed to free it from his person. But her hands did not stop there, instead running smoothly down the sides of his torso and around to the front, her gloved fingers undoing the knot in his belt. She slipped the small rope off, leaving his shirt to hang loose.

Zel: ::looks positively bright red:: eeee....

Xel: ::waves a hand in front of Zel's face getting no reaction, shrugs, grins evily for a moment, kisses Zel, then sits back down with his usual grin on his face::

Zel: ::eyes suddenly go wide open:: FRUITCAKE!!! ::punches Xellos into the wall::

Xel: ::still smiling::

Silve: hehehehehehehehehehehe

Zel paused as he felt Lina begin to pull his shirt up. He sat up, helping her to pull the tan fabric up and over his head, tossing it aside idly.

Ruby eyes grew wide as they gazed upon the young man's now bare upper body. He had been handsome as a chimera...but as a human...he was perfect

Zel: who the heck'd think I look good like this!

Silve: countless fangirls...

Xel: me ::grin::

Silve and Zel: FRUITCAKE!!!!

Silve: ::giggles::

Dilgear: the sad thing is... I'm the sanest one here...

A blush crept over her partner's cheeks as he felt her eyes upon him, hoping greatly that she was liking what she saw.

Lina reached her hand out towards him, intent on stroking those beautiful muscles. But Zel had another plan in mind. Taking her gloved hand gently, he brought it to his mouth, delicately taking a bit of fabric above her fingertip between his teeth. She watched with interest as he slowly pulled back, bringing the glove with him and away from her hand. When he had removed it, he tossed the glove aside and again brought her hand to his lips, this time laying a tender kiss upon each of her fingertips before trailing down to nibble gently at her wrist.

Zel: ::Starts squirming in his seat and trying to keep his mind off the fic::

Dilgear: ::sweatdrop:: um... why am I here? If its for no reason... please let me leave!!

Silve: but DILLY-POO!!! You don't wanna leave ME! Your adoring fan!! Do you? ::blinkblink::

Dilgear: ::sighs and sits back down and looks at Zel who's in obvious discomfort:: Poor Zel...

At last Zel released her hand, smiling gingerly at her. Lina took the opportunity to run her fingers over his warm, strong chest as he repeated the process with her other hand.

Zelgadiss's hands, meanwhile, had come to rest on her waist, tugging her shirt free from her pants. He began to pull the shirt up, but paused, looking up at her as if for a sign of approval.

Zel: ::mutters something that could be gibberish then looks at Silve:: I thought you LIKED me!!!

Silve: oh, but I do! That's why I requested this fic from MJ!!!

Xel: and you don't even thank her for it! Shame on you!

Zel: I'm supposed to thank her for this!!

Dilgear: ::whispers:: just thank her... its much safer that way...

Lina simply nodded, lifting her arms over her head as he slipped the shirt off. A grin spread across her face as Zel noticed just how much she had filled out over the years. Almost timidly, he undid the clasp of her simple white bra, laying the garment carefully aside.

Zel: ::blushes brightly then suddenly falls over in his chair:: gods... ::still laying there unmoved::

Silve: um... Zel... there's still more...

Xel: come on Zel! Its not even to the fun part yet!!!

Zel: ::slowly get back up with Dilgear's help:: this is cruel and unusual punishment!!!

A small gasp escaped the sorceress's lips as she felt his mouth upon her breast, raining gentle kisses against the soft, snowy flesh, trailing downwards to her already hard nipple.

Zelgadiss suckled the tender spot hungrily, his tongue playing over the hard bit of flesh much to Lina delight. Her other breast he cupped in his hand, his thumb copying his tongue's motions.

(*At this point the author takes a quick break to pour some ice water over her head* ^_^ I'm ok...back to the story)

Zel: ::still blushing and starting to fidget in his seat nerviously::

Xel: think you should follow example...

Silve: ::grins then snaps her fingers sending ice water on top of Zel::

Zel: GAH!!!!! ::glares at Silve::

Silve: sorry....

Lina's hands clutched the back of Zel's head, wrapping his hair around her fingers in her passion. Her back arced to meet him, craving more of the wonderful sensations he was giving her.

::Xel and Silve watch Zel start to get red::

Silve: when do ya think he's gonna crack?

Xel: we'll see ^_^

She protested with a loud moan as he finally released her breast to trail kissed down her stomach. Zel simply smiled, nuzzling her belly with his nose. Lina quickly stopped arguing when she felt his hands reach for the edge of her pants.

::Xel and Silve watch Zel get redder::

Dilgear: geeze, you to are evil...

Xel: ^_^

Silve: I AM NOT EVIL!!! Just twisted...

Dilgear: ::gulp:: sorry... ::sweatdrop::

XEL: ^_^;;;

In what seemed like a matter of seconds, pants, boots, and undergarments were a thing of the past. Each stripped away till nothing remained between them but the night air.

Zelgadiss looked over his lady's body with wonder. L-sama, had she ever looked so radiant before tonight? So perfect...and all his. The years of imprisonment had been worth it if only to be so close to his angel for this night.

::Xel and Silve watch Zel get even redder::

Silve: ya think?

Xel: ::nod::

Zel: WHY THE HELL DO YOU TORTURE ME LIKE THIS!!!

Silve: because... I got a surprise for you... and it will be a reward for putting up with this... ::wolf grin::

Xel: she's got a surprise for you alright ^_~

Silve: ::whaps Xel:: yer not helping Fruitcake...

Xel: ouch ^_^

Zel: ::glares at Xel and Silve:: you two are sick...

Years of wandering...searching...waiting for this moment, and Lina was certainly not disappointed. It was all worth it for this beautiful man who now sat above her. Everything...just to be with him....

Once again their lips met in a passionate embrace, hands roaming over the contours of each other's body. Pressing so close they almost seemed as one.

Zel: ::sputters:: sh-sh-sh...

Silve: ::gags Zel:: no bad language dearie ::wolf grin::

Zel: ::tears it off:: damn you Silvernyte! How could you put me through this!?

Silve: ::just blinks innocently::

Dilgear: ::pats Zel an the shoulder:: It'll be over soon... I think...

Zel's hand wandered down the smooth curve of Lina's inner thigh, finding it's way between her legs. There he stopped, looking into her ruby eyes with surprise.

"Not even one?"

A deep blush spread across the sorceress cheeks. "I was saving myself...for you...."

Xel: aw... how sweet...

Silve: it is, isn't it ::dreamy sigh::

Zel: must... controll... fist... of... death...

"You..." the former chimera began, but was quickly silenced my Lina's lips against his. He resolved to simply close his eyes and return her kiss, his fingers playing gently between her legs.

Silve: ::puts a pillowcase over her head and laughs nerviously::

Xel: tisk, tisk, Wolfie ::dumps a bucket of ice water on her::

Silve: ::dripping:: gee... thanx...

Zel: ::takes a break from doing his beet impression to laugh at Silve for a moment::

Silve: ::sulks::

However, his eyes shot open again when he felt her hand on his hardness. Gods, he never thought her touch could feel that wonderful. Zel released a soft moan into her mouth, causing her tighten her grip, for which she received a much louder moan from her partner.

Zel: ::eyes pop out:: erk...

Silve: ::watches Zel and giggles::

Xel: ^_^

Dilgear: ::sneaks off, not able to take much more::

Zelgadiss's hand slide slowing back up Lina's thigh, spreading her legs farther apart. She in turn released him from her grasp, draping her arm over his back, pulling him closer.

Lina looked up at Zel as he ended their kiss, moving softly to her ear. She smiled. This is what she had been waiting for for so long.

"I love you Lina," Zelgadiss whispered into her ear just before he entered her.

Zel: ack! ::Collapses::

Silve: poor Zelly-poo... ::pulls a piece f ice from nowhere and drops it in his shirt and backs up a ways behind Xellos giggleing::

Zel: ::leaps up trying to get the ice out:: ACK!!! FRUITCAKES!!!

Silve: mmm... fruitcake is yummy...

Xel: I never knew you thought that ^_~

Silve: ::WHAPS Xel:: grr... don't make fun of me while I'm hungry...

She gasped at the sudden sensation. But the slight pain of her first encounter soon melted into pleasure as he began his movements, slowly at first and then quickening as she became use to the feeling of him inside her.

(*Author runs off for a minute to take car of a massive nosebleed*)

Xel: poor MJ couldn't take her own writing... tisk tisk... I expected more from her...

Silve: eh... well... you have to admit...

Zelgadiss was overwhelmed with his own pleasure, feeling Lina's hot body around him, pressing his lips to her soft neck. It only heightened when she began to moan his name, doing her best to match her thrusts with his own.

Zel: ::looks ready to faint again:: you two are sick and cruel...

Xel: ^_^

Silve: sick, I'll admit to... cruel, only sometimes...

Lina's sharp nails dug into the tender flesh of Zel's back, but he didn't mind it at all. It felt good...she felt incredible...he felt as though he were about to explode....His lover arched her back, pressing into him. Lina shut her eyes tightly, not able to hold back anymore as she reached her climax, crying out in pure pleasure.

Zelgadiss gasped as he came with her almost violently, holding her tightly in his embrace as the two shared the moment of passion they had waited so long for.

Zel: ::gulps:: you requested this Silve?

Silve: yeah!

Zel: I repeat, you are sick, and I could add twisted to that...

Silve: hey... as I said once before "I'm one sick were-puppy!"

Xel: I think I like her ^_^

Bodies and minds completely exhausted, they lay there still entwined, savoring every last moment.

"Oh Zel..." Lina whispered, burying her face in her lover's soft shoulder. He smiled, tired but unbelievably happy, carefully smoothing down the locks of her fiery red hair.

Zel: ::blinks:: thank Gods! That scene is done!

Silve: yeah... it was sorta short... wish it was longer...

Xel: so do I ^_^

Zel: ::glares::

Lina looked up at him, her ruby eyes shining. "Worth the wait love?"

"I would have waited all of eternity for you Lina-chan," Zelgadiss kissed her forehead.

Lina Inverse sighed happily, closing her eyes, holding her lover close. Finally her life was perfect. She was with the one she loved and nothing...nothing...would ever keep them apart again.

The End

Silve: ::sniffles:: AWW! Isn't that SWEET!!!

Zel: you call that sweet, I call that torture...

Xel: "sweet", "torture", no big difference... ::shrug::

Zel and Silve: you ARE a Frutcake...

Silve: the King Fruitcake...

Xel: OOH! I'm the king!!

(*Author's final notes* - Wasn't that beautiful? I think I'm gonna cry! *sniffle*.....Ok, enough of that. Where my bonus?! Hand over those hunky dragon boys right now!! ^_^ Oh ya...email comments to insanity_25@hotmail.com Have a nice day!)

Xel: what's that note about Silve?

Silve: I had to bribe her... otherwise she might have taken months...

Zel: you bribed her with...

Silve: a full-sized Valgarv and Garv...

Xel: ::giggles:: did she have fun with them?

Silve: at the end she had Garv going on his knees on command... heh...

Xel: OH! I wish I was there!

Silve: er... I got the tapes... hehehehe

Xel: OOOH! GIMME!!

Zel: you two are sick...

Silve: ::grins:: ready for your payment Zelly-poo??? Hehehehe...

Zel: ::gulps as Silve drags him away into a room::

Xel: good thing I managed to sneak a few hidden cameras in there... hee hee ^_^


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